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Vlad III Dracula[edit]

I'd like some review of the structure of this page. Are the historical and apocrophical accounts of Dracula well separated enough? Would some other structure be better? Also general style review please. Zeimusu | (Talk page) 00:18, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)

First impression - bad prose - too many tiny paras, merge. Sections are ok, you may want to break off the end of 'Reputation' section into a new one ('Fiction' or sth like this) and expand this with info from Dracula#Origins. A few more pics would be nice. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 10:45, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)